Debbie Does the Houtman Abrolhos – Seven #SexySnippets

Ocean’s Gift by Demelza Carlton’s settling in for his first night in a fishing shack at the Houtman Abrolhos Islands, checking out his entertainment options:

They all seemed to be holiday videos, from someone called Debbie who went to the US. I stuck one of them in the VCR, hit play and opened up the fridge.

I could hear weird noises.

Hell, it sounds like the neighbours are having sex, so loud I can hear it next door.

I went outside to see if I could work out who my noisy neighbours were, but I couldn’t hear anything from out there. I went back in.

I looked around and the little TV screen caught my eye. It looked like while Debbie was in Dallas, she saw more action than I ever got.

Seven sentences from Ocean’s Gift for The Nuthouse Scribblers: Sexy Snippets.

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8 comments on “Debbie Does the Houtman Abrolhos – Seven #SexySnippets
  1. Dee Little says:

    Lol I liked this snippet 🙂

    • Why thank you – I had one reviewer state that the book was unrealistic because Joe didn’t recognise the video immediately for what it was, though it was a pirated version with a handwritten label. I thought the same thing initially, but all my male editors and beta-readers assured me that, even if he suspected he knew what the video was, he’d have to pop it in the player and watch it all the way through, just to be certain. Blokes… *shakes head*

  2. Lol, now there’s a surprise for him 😉 Loved the humour in this.

  3. Kiru Taye says:

    LOL @ Action Debbie. Great snippet.

  4. Now that was a great snippet!